It was a sad and interesting concept. The two tiny complaints I have is that the audio was a bit on the soft side I mean way too soft. I had to literally put my ears up to the speakers of my computer just to hear it. And then come the duration of this short. To me it was lacking of certain credentials to give it a more deeper emotional feedback. If you went deeper and more in depth of the story you would of had me balling in tears since I'm the guy with a big soft heart for sad tales of any kind. Just call it a deep sense of compassion. To me the idea was there, it really was. I just wish you would of ventured deeper into the final moments, romantic, sob story for that bigger blow. But I digress, I'm going to bestow you a 2 in a half out of 5. And a 3/5 in voting power. Again it was good but try and go in for that emotional kill when you create something not just the story by itself. Without the right emotional a few things can occur. Either the story gets its message or emotional points in a wrong manner or it becomes too lacking and almost soulless to bear in itself. You have the body, The structure and then the most important key element is the soul and I just don't see or feel the soul here. But again you've done good and don't let anybody say different here. I hope you keep practicing, creating and contributing here. I also hope you've enjoyed this review friend. Stay creative and strong! Good day.