This was very good if you managed to piece it together in 24 hours! Your style and flare have a very reminiscent, old nostalgic appeal of animation that have been lost in an era of old. Match that with a peppy adult sense of humor and what do you get? YOU! You have a style of humor I truly enjoy and that's dark, twisted sense of humor. This one falls in my mind's category true adult form. Timing was perfect within the whole short and not only that but the voice acting was spot on in character. Audio wise was a decent tune that brings about an adult form of animation that has both taste and originality. I was going to give you a bland 3/5 but I think a 3 in a half out of 5 seems to be in order to me! And I'm going to give you a 3/5 in good favor in voting power. Congratulations on doing a good piece of animation here my friend! I hope you've enjoyed this review and that you contribute here more at a later date. Until then, Have a wonderful day!