NewgroundSage's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[BUS.]

Don't we all have those days? That was an interesting piece yet it lacked two essential parts to it. Audio and a tad bit of a slower pace (Except for the big reveal as you've shown where that gentleman's shoulder is embedded in on a certain part to that obese man's body). Style was unique in a dreamy like sequence yet as mentioned in prior I didn't have too much time to enjoy or intake the style since it feels fast paced and flat out rushed. I enjoy as an observer to take everything in account and detail (for better or worse) and to never miss a single solitary fraction or pigment on what I am witnessing. But in great respect you've done and good job in creating something and showcasing it with great valiant pride! I'm going to bestow you a 2/5 and a 2/5 in voting power. Again try and pace yourself with your works in the future, you might get some surprising and unique results if you do! I hope you keep creating, practicing and contributing here. I also hoped you've enjoyed this review. Good day.

[Ollie's Algebra]

This was quite intriguing in art style and tone. How it was presented was in a crude light yet it was so surreal in a minor sense. Audio was a bit too soft in tone though I heard some of it by sticking my face close enough to hear the speakers to some extent. Again I was taken aback by the unique crude style of your artistic style i really admired it sense I'm a very huge fan of surrealism of any kind and this was just one of them! I'm going to give you a 2 in a half out of 5 and a 3/5 in voting power. you've done a wonderful job here friend! I hope you keep practicing, creating and contributing on here. I hoped you've also enjoyed this review. Good day.

[Doraemon! the Mutivation.]

That was pretty catchy to a good certain extent. The graphics look and feel a bit dated (My mind literally thought for a breif moment that this spawned itself out of the 90's). Audio was a bit so-so where i can hear it some and then not too well but it sufficed to say the least. I haven't seen nor heard of that manga character in ages neither so its a nice refresher...In a dark humored like manner. I'm going to bestow you a 2 in a half out of 5. And a 2/5 in voting power. I hope keep practicing, creating and contributing here. I also hoped you've enjoyed this review. Good day.

[Slender parody (Test)]

So this was your first parley, eh!? I have to say you've done a splendid job my friend. The pacing for the main character and the whole film was a hair tad slow. Animation is well detailed you even have visual and sight gag humor to perform with! It made me chuckle on how repulsive Dora becomes (this is why its best to keep to one's self about letting the tv add a few pounds on somebody hosting and what not!). Not only that but I can envision this being a fair series once you plant your feet into the ground and go toe to toe with these minor challenges. As an animator you have the essentials and skills on making anything happen as long as you put your mind and heart into it, that's all that counts. You've done well friend! And for that you are bestowed a solid 3/5 and a 3/5 in voting power. Stay with it and you'll do fine! And don't let the other reviews and single minded individuals get you down some neither (Even I falter by some harsh verbal exchanges). But anywho, I hope you've enjoyed this review. Practice, create and contribute your works here my friend and stay focused! Have a wonderful day friend! Good day.

Daker777NG responds:

Wow thanks! Having in mind i did not even finished it, thats a pretty good score!! Its like, more than half!! xDD

[Dumpster Clock's Dream]

Pretty neat. In an ironic way your choice of soundtrack reminds me of [Adult Swim]'s bumpers from time to time. Animation was so-so but as you've titled in a dream like manner. You've done a decent job here friend. And for that I'm going to bestow you a 2 in a half out of 5. And a 2/5 in voting power. I hope you keep practicing, creating and contributing here. I also hope you've enjoyed this review. Good day.

[Magic Jizz ep 2 Wardog]

Man! This series gets more messed up! Just when you think your safe some guy behind bars wants to start raping you till you are his b*#@%! It just goes to show you that our protagonists gets in some deeper trouble than whats its worth from after his "innocence". Alot of messed up things occur when our star character first sets foot behind prison life and doesn't get a very friendly welcoming. In fact, his welcoming is a bet more intimate by his deadly peers. And then all Hell starts breaking lose to the big finale. For making me laugh within my mind, I'm going to bestow you a 3 in a half out of 5. And a 3/5 in voting power. I hope you keep practicing, creating and contributing on this site. I hope you've enjoyed this review. Good day.

wardog810 responds:

i all ways love your reviews

[Magic Jizz ep 1 Wardog]

Man! .....That was messed up and this is coming from a guy that's seen it all too! Animated style was so-so where its a bit rough on the eye. Audio on the other hand is perfect. Yeah, we'll leave it at that! The whole take on this was down, dirty and a bit underhanded but that's where some of the dark humor stems from. Its a bit on the random WTF category as well in the back of my mind. But regardless you've done a heck of a job in your flash short. I'm going to bestow you a 3 in a half out of 5. And a 3/5 in voting power I hope you keep practicing, creating and contributing here. I hope you've enjoyed this review. Good day.

wardog810 responds:

man i all ways look for your reviews

[It All Ends]

It was a sad and interesting concept. The two tiny complaints I have is that the audio was a bit on the soft side I mean way too soft. I had to literally put my ears up to the speakers of my computer just to hear it. And then come the duration of this short. To me it was lacking of certain credentials to give it a more deeper emotional feedback. If you went deeper and more in depth of the story you would of had me balling in tears since I'm the guy with a big soft heart for sad tales of any kind. Just call it a deep sense of compassion. To me the idea was there, it really was. I just wish you would of ventured deeper into the final moments, romantic, sob story for that bigger blow. But I digress, I'm going to bestow you a 2 in a half out of 5. And a 3/5 in voting power. Again it was good but try and go in for that emotional kill when you create something not just the story by itself. Without the right emotional a few things can occur. Either the story gets its message or emotional points in a wrong manner or it becomes too lacking and almost soulless to bear in itself. You have the body, The structure and then the most important key element is the soul and I just don't see or feel the soul here. But again you've done good and don't let anybody say different here. I hope you keep practicing, creating and contributing here. I also hope you've enjoyed this review friend. Stay creative and strong! Good day.

rsetienne responds:

Thanks i will take your notes in consideration for future projects

[Annoying Navi]

This is so very true for any Legend of Zelda fan. I'll never forget. NEVER! Artistic style is bland and fair. Although you've won over my laughter over Link's facial expressions. I would make them to since it gets a bit repetitive for awhile which speaking of which, The only minor complaint is this annoying loop which is very ironic in a sense itself. I'm bestowing you a 3/5 and a 3/5 in voting power. I hope you keep practicing, creating, and contributing here. I hope you've enjoyed this review. Good day.

wafflepwn92 responds:

thanks allot dude, ill work out how to fix the looping.
appreciate the feedback. and yes it is true for any legend of zelda fan damn navi.

[Out of Order 1]

THAT WAS FANTASTIC!!!! Nothing can describe this feeling of seeing something so well done. I sighted barely any flaws at all in fact I couldn't detect anything at all! Audio was great! And the style was superb! You have the essentials, the know how and the capabilities to create and give everybody what they deserve. You threw out punches and you didn't hold back with your very long creation. This proves and goes to show you what time, patience, perseverance and and artistic eye can take you when you perfect and hone your artistic skills. You sir are fantastic! Don't mind anybody else says. Although I admit you are a true artisan with a hear too for asking the public's hand into giving honest criticisms. I was expecting something that one would put effort into and struggled for the stage. Right here I didn't sens anything of that nature! So as I reiterate, You have done an amazing job and should be proud of your work. You are something that needs to inspire and change it up here for Newgrounds. With you and anyone with the talent and the know how you along with the proud and few can help inspire new and old generations into becoming artisans themselves. You are receiving a solid 5/5 and a 5/5 in voting power! You deserve this score and critique as a man who has the time and patience to undertake and prove that you can be a great artisan by your time and patience to polish and create a powerful devastating final product and that's what you have right here! I hope you keep creating and contributing here and most importantly is to continue on and strive amongst the ranks here. Do me and every other underdog proud friend. Keep up the good work and stay creative and strong. I hope you have a pleasant good day sir and keep sticking with it! Good day.

kmau responds:

Yeah I'm pretty badass.